With this paper, my main point is that everybody has their own writing process. I also explain that many writers have poor writing habits and that fixing those bad habits will help improve their papers. I supported this by giving examples of what I do for my writing process, and asked the readers to compare mine to theirs. I think that I started off with a strong introduction, but the weak points I feel happened when I started explaining my writing process; it might be confusing for the readers. I would like to know if the paper makes sense, and if I need to explain some things with a little more detail. If I had more time, I would try to make the paper flow together a little better.
Link to paper: http://www.scribd.com/doc/80374171/ENG151-Paper-2
link to reviewed paper http://www.scribd.com/doc/80603416
ReplyDeleteWhat i got from your paper the first time through is that everyone has their own processes for how they write. I think you had all of the required criteria that Professor Whicker. I like the way your paper was put together and how you shared with us your writing process. The problems I had with your paper was the lack of citation and I feel as if it could have flown a little better as you said. Overall I think you did a great job and you will be fine when you meet with him if you make the proper changes.