With this paper I am trying to explain to the readers that everybody has their own writing process. One of the points I am trying to get across through this article is that everybody has a flaw in their process, and that fixing the flaws will help improve the processes. I supported my points with my own writing process experiences, and the steps I go through. I think that I started off with a strong introduction, but the weak points I feel happened when I started explaining my writing process; it might be confusing for the readers. I would like to know if the paper makes sense, and if I need to explain some things with a little more detail. If I had more time, I would try to make the paper flow together a little better. After I got my peer review, I didn't change much. He found some grammatical errors and thought some sentences were confusing, but that was all that I fixed.
Link to paper: http://www.scribd.com/doc/81143171/ENG151-Paper-2
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